Saadido_

Barely humanish.

Short af

I'd say the lack of goal for the mc makes it feel slow

you repeated a few paragraphs

You pasted this twice

great quality compared to this site. Try posting this on rr or qq. well done hope you continue. For new readers the 2nd person point of view is only jarring for a little while.

an extra "H to"

Asmongler?

If he lets Zeus and Poseidon abuse women while knowing what they'll do and having the power to stop them he's just as bad as them.

I don't like the direction this is going. Loki is taking more and more of a backseat and that is boring.