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This is a celebration - not every celebration needs to be the same, or need to be a 16th century ball among nobles. A pasta made by your mother and shared with neighbors is perhaps a greater and more original celebration than many that have become big events but empty of meaning.
Bro, there are people who kill the guys they idolize. So killing someone for not liking their story is not so far-fetched
We all had thought about physical exercise, but a very specific one
As long as they don't start calling him Fat Big Dong
The story is interesting, but a editor is essential for it
Or she did not say anything or she did say one thing
I understand from the context that it should be Alex. What I want to know is who is this Sam who appears in Alex's place from time to time?
Sometimes you say Eden Blue, other you say Earth. This is some mistake or they are the two worlds and I'm misunderstanding?
we get it, they were familiar with it
"don't know why" haw many times bro?
Bro, most of times when you use the expressions "you could say", "well", and "now", you really can just take out it from the phrase and won't make difference. Sometimes we use these expressions while speaking, but using while writting will make the text repetitive, wearing. So, I suggest you try stop using these stuff. Maybe I am making a poor judgment, but I believe your work will show improvement if you read one or two times more before you conclude. Mistakes like misspelled words will lessen. The story is interesting, I hope it continues and always improving.[img=recommend]