Yasashiki

Yeah, that’s how it was for my first story. Now, I want to have (almost) everything ready because I was highly inconsistent later on with chapter release. Writing on the spot is definitely doable, and forcing your imagination this way is a good first experience as a writer, in my opinion. You also accept criticism and learn from your mistakes, self-reflecting on what you have done until now, which is a neat thing not everyone can do. This story is good, I like it a lot, and the only ‘downside’ I could think of on the spot is the length of a chapter, but that’s fine since you upload a lot. It’s just my subjective liking to read/write longer chapters, so it’s far from necessary. Keep up the good work man, a good Arcane fanfic is not a common thing (even more one that might get finished) :).

I’m trying to cook but it’s difficult, I will definitely post a new story at some point, I just don't know when yet, I'm too harsh with myself.

The first time is more like ‘copying’ until it reaches the right amount, afterward it will regenerate over time as if it was his own chakra. And I’m glad to hear that you like the story :).

I know, I didn’t want my MC to be perfect so I made him flawed (mostly his emotional control being misused) and that’s the thing he will have the most remorse with, but he’s changing throughout the story and you shouldn't be disappointed by the end :). Still, good luck reading since the first third of the chapters came out two years ago (nearly three) so my grammar might be harsh.

Welp, good luck during your read, I honestly find the early chapters meh grammatical-wise, they were written 2 years ago after all. Still, I hope you will like it :).

The mistake is basically how his race went to extinction, he created something he shouldn’t have and after recovering his memories (which will happen while at Overwatch so during the first arc, not later), he will finish his business here and travel with some Overwatch characters as well as others, firstly he will need to ‘reproduce’ to fix this mistake and secondly, it will simply be something that links all the fictions I chose together, it’s needed as the main storyline or he would travel without reasons.

Do you not realize that the betrayal already happened ages ago? It was before a fragment of his soul goes through countless reincarnations, this Naruto fanfiction included, there’s no betrayal in the overlord/omniverse fic since it already happened before even the prologue.

I wasn’t precise enough, my bad. It’s something that was plaguing her soul and Mc did not find it before, and that’s why she stayed unconscious afterward despite the ‘healing’, since it requires more than that to recover from, I will change this part a tiny bit.