Jasmine_05

If I may be honest, I have really felt betrayed when every novel (well not every) but the majority of novels I have read end up as harem novels when the novels started in a good direction but the more I read the more it was being distorted, destroyed by mindless mc that were originally at the beginning the perfect character but later too much women that threw to mc and mc softness toward women ended destroying the novels. If I may say, in almost every novel, there appears a, little sister, a childhood friend, a boss lady, a ceo lady, a tsundere lady, damsels in distress, don’t forget the betrayed saint, demon lord lady, ghost sister, a lady in distress who is losing her inheritance, the assassin woman that later betrays her organization for the mc, the mc’s enemy woman that later turns toward the main character because of her own conclusions, and more like the last one who would be the beauty who thinks the mc is worthy to be her rival. And many more, but the list is long, and if I may say, this really makes me feel like I’m watching mindless MCs.

By the way, don’t make the MC be too soft on women, and make him more direct and a person who isn’t interested in women. In other words don’t make him a harem gatherer, make him indifferent to women, and if you’re thinking of make it a romance please, make the MC character the type whom would only fall in love with only one women. Make him awaken his feelings only after he meets his fated partner, and make him only have a soft side only for his family and clan, the type that would only value his family before his fated partner appears. More like a individual indifferent and cold to those outside his family and only when his fated partner appears would his feelings start awakening, like an instinct that he would know who his fated parten is be it by a special power that would bond them and a mark that would only appears when his fated partner appears or is born. This is my sincere advice and please 🙏 I beg you please take this advice to heart because I’m am not the only one who wish for this, and many would share my same opinion, because I ended disappointed with many novels who started in a good way like this but ended destroyed because the authors little by little the MCs were too soft on women, women flocked like flies around them, and he made his harem, though they make MCs appear cold and indifferent, they appear too soft on women, which destroys his image and worse when they make it harem with a cold and indifferent MC who only think women should be treated more softly. So please don’t destroy your mc and make the people whom he relates himself with more normal and not only woman, but are more men friend a brotherhood or the like.

I love the novel, and really enjoyed the development of the main character ☺️😌 it’s the maximum and only few novels have a good mc development, so I don’t want to waste this opportunity to ask the author: Please never think of making it a harem, it’s a request because many stories end destroyed or so to say, bad, because suddenly harem is included in the story and I have read many of those stories so that sometime I think of giving up on reading those novels. Then there is the second request, please don’t mindlessly add women in the picture, I mean, don’t make them flock around the main character only because of a little interest, make them more normal, do not make them follow the protagonist as a chick who, 1). The women become interested in the MC because she lost to him. 2). The woman became interested because she made eye contact with MC 3). The woman follow him because she thinks he hides his strength after eye contact which made her shudder and latter she follow him around, thinking that she already fell for him. 4). The women flock around just because he said something that made the woman interested, mad, sad, recomforting, happy, or nostalgic. 5). The women flock just because he has strength, which most often happen in many novels thinking they have fallen for him and his strength and latter they flatter him, making them realize they are meant for him. 5). The women flock around him just because he saved them, in many ways which include, save the beauty in distress from bandits, monters, beasts, demon cultivators, from being used as a sacrifice by devil cultivators, from persistent pursuers when she was searching where to hide bumping into MC who helps them, and many more that I would say. 6). The Women flock around him just because MC acted king by helping them. And there are more reasons, but really this reasons all include the fact that they feel enamorated because he’s strong, so please, don’t make them women characters flock around the mc like flies, make them more normal, just add them as friend but not mindlessly add only women, but also men friends he saves so to make it more balanced and better. By the ways there is one more type of women you should not make, women whom were saved by MC who was asked to save them by a brother, a parent, a sister, etc. but please never forget to make the story more balanced because this types of novels like this one you’re making are rare to say if we were to rank them as in novels, this is above legendary class novel, it could be said mythical rank or above, so please and I beg you, make the story more normal with no women just flocking around the mc just because. Because I saw in this chapter that the sect of only women appeared I have the feeling you would make the sect leader fall for mc, which already made eye contact and I can see you would make her interested in him after just that or a little talk.

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