daydreamer_no1

will he use the devil fruit token on the human human fruit model Adam? I hope he does just imagine the boost and increased potential he could get to his body from it he'll be like the next coming of Adam and become peak human or maybe even surpass it.

I just read the whole fic to the latest ch there's only been 2 girls and the girls this guy mentioned hasn't even been born yet it's utterly baffling to see so much hate when they are delusional like this and still read when it clearly says there's a harem, there is no "forced" romance or "forced" plot relating to it in my opinion it was really well done I could go for some lemons though lolol it's not really a big focus as well though it does come in now and again but it's not all in your face like "oh your so handsome let me love you and kiss you I worship your everything" it shows how good they are for each other and being able to bring some light and strength to each other like they are supposed to not like some trophy but actual intellectuals who stand by him and actually love him while he loves them back and admitting that he has a pirates greed that he may have another woman to one of them. so this review it's just some goofy ass online harem "hater"

I think this is done by a.i usually it's barely felt like it but this ch has more of it felt in it

my life I've only just realized that.

that's like actually on point asf it pissed me off because the start was actually really amazing and then he became a marine and turned into a disappointment, like at first I didn't like him being a marine and not a bounty hunter or pirate but I was like "meh I'll give it a go" then he found out he died again to that float float guy and just lost his brain and balls.

it's because he keeps being a idiotic coward and purposely fks up just to stay "lowkey"

you are doing amazing honestly but maybe instead of kind of speedeunning the things that happened during the time skip go more into the time and slow down a bit if that makes sense? like it's his time of rest so I wanna feel it not be told it? I hope I'm making sense but anyway you're doing good

Morgan's fruit powers: cancel cancel fruit can cancel anybody he dislikes in but a single news paper...how terrifying

that's not really impressive in one piece lol that's still pre new world power levels castles are literally nothing in one piece.

that's exactly how I felt tbh like we didn't know enough about the Mc then bam pulled out that "emotional" trial outa nowhere and ya expecting me to care enough about some side character from his past, it just didn't hit like it was supposed to