RedBeard73

Now at chapter 64, it hasn’t gotten any better, and I have decided to give up and drop it. If it really does get better at some point it took far too long to do so.

It’s not just slow, it’s stuffed full of completely useless exposition and explanations. Entire chapters shouldn’t be used to explain why the MC does something only for the next chapter to be two or three sentences of dialogue only for the rest of the chapter to explain why the MC said what he did, and then talk about something that has nothing to do with the situation. I’m at chapter 30 and if you removed the useless exposition and explanations (not all of it just the useless stuff) I would be at max chapter 15

The writing quality is decent, and there aren’t any big mistakes, but plot wise the author makes some confusing choices or just forces things cause they can’t figure out how to do what they want without forcing certain plot points. My biggest problem with the story is that it has no tension, it’s not exciting at all. Between that and how slow the plot is I constantly found myself scrolling through large sections of chapters only for nothing to change. Every chapter I was forcing myself to keep reading, hoping for the story to pick up and something interesting to happen, but even him joining a familia felt so boring and anticlimactic. I had to just give up at chapter 25

The MC is painfully naive and stupid, and the author decides to kill off all the adults of the group in some stupid and contrived way to create character development, just to make the MC play baby sitter for his siblings. Also, 40 chapters in and we still haven’t met a single cannon character.

Heavily feels like a Chinese novel with the way the characters interact, even the interactions between friends can feel far too formal. Story gets really boring and almost repetitive, when the MC starts doing something new there is almost no difficulties or interesting things, he just spends time doing it and becomes better with no conflict or failure.

Biggest problem is just how cringy and badly written the MC is. He’s supposed to be an 80 year old scholar yet acts like a stupid kid, is dumb as hell, and then goes back and then we get the emotions bullshit where he gets mad and doesn’t even know why he’s mad, then he says he’s not afraid of Zeus while he stands there petrified waiting for his death. The last straw was the fact that he somehow beat Zeus because his Bident protected him and essentially beat Zues by itself despite the fact that Zeus’s Bolt is supposed to be more powerful, and even if it isn’t it shouldn’t in any way be able to beat Zues. The plot armor is overwhelmingly bad

Author reposts the same chapter for over 30 chapters to try and seem like they are posting regularly while scamming people out of their coins. Which is directly against Webnovels rules by the way.

The grammar isn’t too bad, it’s not broken English or anything, but the writing style and the way the characters talk is so cringy I couldn’t focus much on the story and eventually quit at chapter 20.

It’s not good, grammar is abysmal, and the author can’t even get the mythologies right. It might get better later on, but 40 chapters in it still hasn’t improved, and even if does improve grammatically, the world building has been so bad that it ruins the rest of the story.

Doesn’t lead into anything in a creative way, just slaps the MC with the most OP abilities from different anime, rattling off all of his abilities at once, didn’t even try anything clever