Felhavon

Awesome! That's good to hear.

Pretty good so far! Keep it going, you have a really good set of characters for the group chat and his background in DxD is legit as well. Please keep it going!

I really like the premise and the writing quality despite the amount of exposition. Not quite at the point of taking a paragraph to describe the color of a leaf but not that far off either at times. MC's trauma feels a bit like it's being forced to add depth so I hope that's not a big ongoing thing. Overall, it's looking like an excellent story with potential.

Some really weird leaps in logic being made here by Dumbles.

I'd have to say either Erica or Artoria from this list. Hotaru from an AU Sailor Moon where things took a darker turn could be interesting for outside the list.

...so he can grow himself a Dio?

Pretty good! MC is quite murderous when pushed too far but the humiliation in chapter 60 is hilarious. I kinda wish there was an actual description of "God's Breath" and where it comes from. Unless I just missed it.

Thanks for the chapter! This is looking promising so far! Seeing how he handles Kohta being bitten will determine his alignment which should be interesting.

I hope you get the next one going soon! Having his hub world be a slice of life anime mixup would be cool. It would be nice if MC acted more like a reincarnate rather than an interesting version of Dante with extra memories that honestly had little impact on how he acted. The play-by-play combat near the start of this was pretty neat as well and would be cool to see more of(in other worlds than his own, I can play the game for DMC5 combat). Overall though I like the premise and the characters involved but you definitely have some story pacing and character interactions to smooth out.

Thanks for the chapter! I can't say I've read a fic where Makino becomes OP. This'll be neat.