FrightKnight88
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3,2,2,3,2 15 chapters+1 word count post, no hint of DC, i assume whatever film it is that he is currently on he is just following the plot word for word because nothing really makes sense at all so the story flows like trash. Can't recommend because outside of it not being a match for the title the story itself just isnt interesting or compelling in the slightest, and author is advertising their patreon in the latest chapter.
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Incredibly bland, the dialogue portrays a very simplistic train of thought, description is lacking, and reactions are over exaggerated, its a slosh to read through. Like wading through knee high water, not enough to ruin your day if you are careful, but definitely a pain to make your way through. Overall I give it a 2, because i was too lazy this time to give each category of the review its own rating.
Swear i Read this story before
Did you or did you not write the story? He absorbed those ants, you didnt say in t4eh story it only affected his arm strength you labeled it STR in general, and strength affects speed, if his strength increase was increased through exercise in the story what you said would make sense, but don't use dumb examples to explain things you didn't state worked that way in the story
Are you suffering brain damage?
And? His age has nothing to do with his potential
in a world where has to fight literal gods, titans, and possibly primordials.
What?
are you changing the way the omnitrix works as far as I know bens never worked off is physical strength or stuff affecting it
I mean whats this even supposed to mean? If you are gonna be racist atleast articulate your points better