Hey Author I rarely find novels of good quality with a bit of logic and creativity but please listen, about the whole grayfia situation... maybe hold off on the domination stuff? I get the harem thing, but forcing ntr to grayfia just wouldn't work. It'd be like bending reality, or mind-controlling Grayfia, which wouldn't be good to mc, especially the consequences of antagonizing Sirzechs. It would mess up the whole story, you know?

it's not man bun it's magical bun

should increase when weight lifting

man gwen being self-righteous is really annoying if she doesn't really do anything about it it's like she has a mesiah complex

mj Zendaya vers?

different language author the books have different language

repetitive you could skip 5 chapters you wouldn't miss anything don't tire out you finger scrolling just skip a chapter and read the first paragraph so fucking damn shit

where is the picture if you, remember the wanted poster of Sanji is only hand drawn and it was even wrong robin will only be known as daughter of Nico Olivia and maybe a scholar if civilians knows it

man I thought they were bu really they're

- The personalities, speech, and thoughts of the characters differ from the show. The author has not accurately captured their personalities, seemingly putting them together based on observations. - POV in the Marine: Garp always seems to be laughing at incorrect times, which does not align with how Garp would laugh. - Nami and Vivi fall in love with the main character even though he did nothing romantically to warrant their affection. They are not shallow enough to fall in love just for looks. - Sanji's reason for having conqueror's haki is weak: "to be the guardian of the crew." In the next panel, Zoro now then doubts his place, feeling he isn't strong enough, the he also becomes the guardian to protect the crew, man you are ruining the depth of characters of the crew. - MC's Knowledge isn't being questioned. I'll just assume the crew is loyal enough not to ask how he knows even the smallest details about Luffy, like Sabo and his amnesia. - Sanji acquiring the lightning-lightning fruit is an odd power-up, considering he already has the Germa blood, this would be better suited for NAMI as she isn't a power house and she could just run fast and additionally she has some science knowledge she may be able to put this in better use - Even with questionable power-ups, the author fails to present a reliable argument within One Piece logic. - After the Alabasta arc, Vivi is forgotten like Tenten, despite having the desert fruit. - Numerous missing sentences disrupt the reader's focus. - The comical punch from Nami is overused and poorly timed. - Another Buggy joins the Straw Hat fleet. Based on Buggy's personality, he would not join another pirate fleet as he now wants to lead his own. He might join an organization but not submit to another pirate fleet. - Man, author, did you not plan on how you would do this? I don't know if this is for another fanfic I've read, but as I read this again, it seems like it's missing the part where he confesses that he knows the future adventures of the crew.

ohio

in a normal world but they are training to become superhuman your skull may be strong but a very strong force in the head would most likely concussed your brain even more so that they can generate strong force in the future

the name might as well mean vile trash

Super short chapters has some nonsensical logic it may decrease your braincells Don't recommend!!!

what kind of logic is this if this is your uncle then Madara is also your distant uncle

ay yoh peeps theres more content on fanfiction.net same name author just cut his chaps and posts here so yeah

in fanfiction.net theres more chapters there

in fanfiction.net theres more chapters there