Human7710

The story is really great, love the aspect of him actually applying physics and mathematics to the world of fantasy. There are several ways he could have incorporated more which would have easily lead to easier wins or a more interesting win but I see why the author didn't do that. The world design is good, just a tad repetitive but you do understand the whole world and how it works even if it gets confusing once in a while. The writing quality is fairly decent with only a few major errors per chapter. The biggest problem I have is the extremely slow updates and if it was not for that this story would get an easy 4.5. Also Story development is cool but just a tad annoying when things you are expecting are skipped over entirely or just gotten rid of .

I absolutely love the story. I enjoy how it's based on Tolkiens Lord Of the Rings and cant wait to see how Rome makes their impact upon Middle Earth. It's also just a cool idea to see how one of the older history best trained and organized militaries would do in a fantasy world. There isn't a massive need to develop world background as it's based on LOTR which is one of the most worlds developed stories of all time. So if you enjoy LOTR and enjoy the mighty roman empire then this story definitely has a promising future.