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Lv14

A reader

2019-01-12 BergabungUnited States

399.9h

membaca

128

Membaca buku-buku

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10

Momen

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a1c9 months ago
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push-ups are real pressure ...
The following morning, Su Wei Wei woke up at 5 a.m. and began doing some pressure-ups inside the cell on the empty floor.
Rebirth; Illegitimate Daughter Turns Tides
Fantasi · Kim_Li_0078
a1c9 months ago
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(bunk bed)
She staggered getting up before slumping back down onto the bunker bed her eyes burning. She felt a strange sensation as her murderous aura strengthened.
Rebirth; Illegitimate Daughter Turns Tides
Fantasi · Kim_Li_0078
a1c9 months ago
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oh my .... that is very heartless.
"They are half-siblings and their genes would match, don't worry... There is no way the fetus's bone marrow is affected by poison, it's just four months...." Huo Yan's cold voice ordered him on what to do, and knowing there was no future for the fetus, they would have to make use of it now while it was still alive.
Rebirth; Illegitimate Daughter Turns Tides
Fantasi · Kim_Li_0078
a1ca year ago
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depression, narcolepsy, laziness
She can't wake up from sleep!
Pregnant Before the Royal Marriage
Umum · Gongsun Xiaoyue
a1ca year ago
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this guy doesn't sound attractive - he is pasty with crypt keeper hands, creepy eyes and it sounds like he needs an immediate transfusion. Yuk!
A hand with distinct joints was placed on the guardrail. The fingers attached to that hand were slim, long, and clean, and there was a string of prayer beads held in them. The blood-red prayer beads offset the fair fingers and made them look even fairer.
Almighty Daughter Runs The World
Perkotaan · Deutsche Unforgotten
a1ca year ago
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continuity? if they are at the auction, how can Yuqi make soup already?????
"Young Master Yi, bad news! After Old Master drank the soup from Lady Yuqi, he suddenly had a high fever. The doctor said that Old Master's condition has worsened and he is in the emergency room right now. Please, come to the hospital!"
Turns Out I'm The Real Heiress
Perkotaan · Nunu
a1ca year ago
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how can a plane land on a helicopter pad? is it a transformer?
One of them was a Boeing 747sp, a limited version worldwide. One cost 1.4 billion yuan, which was the same model as a certain head of the land's plane.
Turns Out I'm The Real Heiress
Perkotaan · Nunu
a1ca year ago
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I can use some proofreading, too.
As they walked through the garden and into the living room, Fang Yuan noticed the walls adorned with precious calligraphy, paintings, and antique artifacts. So, this was the supposedly impoverished Fang Family…
Turns Out I'm The Real Heiress
Perkotaan · Nunu
a1ca year ago
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proofreading is essential. the author is confusing thr characters
As they walked through the garden and into the living room, Fang Yuan noticed the walls adorned with precious calligraphy, paintings, and antique artifacts. So, this was the supposedly impoverished Fang Family…
Turns Out I'm The Real Heiress
Perkotaan · Nunu
a1ca year ago
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Proofreading needed bc of character and gender confusion.
You Luan dealt with the situation skillfully, to the extent that the following day, media headlines were filled with reports of Li Zizi's lies and attempt to frame her colleague. Internet users hurled curses at Li Zizi, claiming he had a flawed character, poor upbringing, and was a conniving person. Some even uncovered footage of Li Zizi being assaulted by his ex-wife when he was her mistress. In an instant, Li Zizi's reputation spread throughout Ancheng City.
A Hidden Pampered Marriage: Boss’ Beloved Wife
Perkotaan · Cleansing Tree