Shaminess

Interesting concept. However it is AI generated and therefore unreadable as far as I’m concerned.

Do you have any idea how annoying this is to those of us who listen on audio instead of read? I’m withholding your stones in protest!!

He is a prince not a lord. More casual treason.

“Your grace” is only for royalty. So he basically committed casual treason right there and could be killed for it.

The little limericks at the end of each chapter are really fun. And they work. I give all my stones whenever I have time to read this fic

The idea is interesting and it has a lot of potential. Sadly the writing style makes it difficult to enjoy the story. The repeat of the same sentences in different words feels like unnecessary padding and the constant use of big words feels like the author is trying too hard to make sure we know they are intelligent. In addition, the dialogue between characters is lacking in volume and the conversations feel stunted. I think this fic is salvageable though if more effort is moved away from describing everything in as big words as possible and into focusing more on the dialogue between characters.

The only thing not to love about this fic is that you don’t post 10 chaps a day. Great job author, keep going!

I dread the moment this novel is finished

the MC is extremely unlikable. massive 👎 from me

I gave it a 1 star mostly because of disappointment. Great premise, interesting read, then turns into harem smut trash. Didn't even have a harem tag. If there was one, I wouldn't have wasted my time.