I love reading, but writing is my soul, my very essence. It’s not just a passion. For writing, I will live. For writing, I shall die. And no matter the struggles or sacrifices, I will rise to the top!
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This chapter would do better as chapter 1, but to be honest, a very strong chapter with a great hook. I like it. 8.5/10
Very interesting idea, but I do wish MC would be more careful with his new powers. I'd say this has quite a lot of potential. Maybe a stronger cliffhanger would do well at the end. Overall, it is a solid 7.5/10 chapter. I'm excited to read more.
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oh, I didn't see that typo, thanks
thank you!
also, thank you so much for all of the support you've given to my book! I can't thank you enough