Luca_Burrello
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the idea is not bad, but you have to revise the story that it seems that you are doing it in a hurry and that the line in which you want to continue the story seems unclear. You should calmly review it and calmly outline how and how the events of your story are to unfold, then the chapters are a little short you should lengthen them a little
the story is really great, Gorgeous, magnificent, elegant, superlative, fantastic a true Artwork .... great job dude👍🏾👍🏾 simple the story is compelling for how you mixed the idea of transmigration in Warcraft and made the idea as a first-rate work of art, you really did a magnificent first-rate job