Thereaperofthedead

It should be in this war as a rider

Yes

That kinda looks like the space station from call of duty or wolfstien

Where is this from?

I would still fuck the bussy

The problem starts from the second chapter because he makes so many mistakes that a super soldier would not make If he was as skilled as you make him out to be he would not need training all he would need to do is get in shape because he would have all the skills he needs from his past life and I find it hard to believe sally would not give him up so then she would not be reminded of her rape.

34 year old man merges with a 9 year old and then becomes a fucking dumbass and the author ignores all criticism with all will be revealed in a couple chapters but it is never explained why he is a dumbass and doesn’t act like a adult but instead a perticliy dumb child.

It was a cool concept but the main character is the hight of dumbness and never kills his enemies.

Are you the one from fanfiction.net because if so I will ignore it but I will send the author a message to confirm.

It was going decently but then he said he was going to get revenge and then became a slave for no reason that makes sense.