tobi_kitty

look I didn't read the full story but isn't that kinda weird that his getting married to some one in a coma. and it kinda looks like they got married after the coma, so it's kinda like not consensual.

This is just really bad, like at first it's a little interesting than it goes downhill. The characters make no sense. The love between the ML and FL is really dry.

I live in detroit and this is the same book as before.

this was good 👍

pokemon

no

no

if he was actually reborn in a broke single mother or broke family it would have worked out better instead of a rich single mom you would have probably had to write more of his childhood. Instead of just a 1 your time skip. It would have been an excuse of telling people what spells he can use. like that don't have enough money to buy something so he learns a spell to turn trash into something valuable or he learns to teleport after he was about to get mugged or something. Which means he runs into the ugly side of the world early on.