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EternalEden

EternalEden

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I like fantasy novels. Maybe someday I'll write one and contribute to this site. We'll see.

2018-12-31 BergabungUnited States
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    EternalEden9min
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    The story has its issues, but I tried to ignore it because it also has some good. However, two issues forced me to drop this. The MC does something stupid and then gets saved by a Deus Ex Machina. This happens a couple of times. Also, the MC has a "Revelation" every so often about how wrong he was and how he needs to learn *blank*. But it never ends. There must've been like 20 "Revelations" and he's still as dumb as a brick. It feels like a waste of time, because any supposed lesson he learns means nothing. And when he inevitably screws up, he'll just get saved by a plot device anyway.

    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
    Televisi · Saintbarbido
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    Tftc

    Ch 60 Sakumo Hatake's Astonishing Power
    A Transmigrator's Story in the Hyuga's Main Branch
    Komik · Hanma_Jack
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden5h
    Balas Daoistu79MEz

    If you don't like my vote you could have just moved on. Why do you have to give it a callout? Do you see how silly that sounds now? I am free to show my dislike, just like you are.

    Naruto - Leader of Kusagakure
    Komik · Kaiszer
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden5h
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    Thank you for the chapter. Kinda hope the werewolf curing thing would hurry up though. I know it's groundbreaking and all, but its been eating up a lot of the story's time...

    Ch 85 Harry Potter : Chapter 84: Beyond II
    Harry Potter : Reborn as Hagrid
    Derivasi dari karya · Demonun
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden21h
    Balas josue_negron

    I'm stealing this.

    I was stumped by their recklessness but in the end, I nodded.
    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
    Televisi · Saintbarbido
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  • EternalEden
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    Control? This can all be stopped with just two words: "I refuse."

    While Neito was depressed, he was far from really worried, his quirk was too strong for anyone to really control him for long.
    MHA: Carbon Copy
    Komik · ImagineMaker
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  • EternalEden
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    The amount of info dumps you need to get through to even START this story is atrocious. Also, the MC's "Golden Finger" is way too much. He has a dozen different powers he completely customized before even being reborn. It's honestly not fun when the MC can have whatever they want with zero effort.

    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Komik · Azrail93
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden6d
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    Came for a witty character and an interesting spin on the series. Left with a depressed little emo and the same shenanigans as the first-year story. Despite all the changes the author likes to pretend happened, the end result is the same. And sure, maybe things won't change immediately, but expecting their readers to endure 60+ chapters before they actually get there makes them a clown.

    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden6d
    Balas DaoistV7zARo

    Eres un idiota increíble. Ésa es la respuesta más vaga que alguien podría dar. "Si no te gusta, haz algo mejor". Oh, lo siento, debo haber olvidado que no se nos permite tener una opinión sobre algo.

    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
    Derivasi dari karya · athass_prkr
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  • EternalEden
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    Balas Fool_King

    No. Because now I already have a billion dollars.

    If Pokemon Tides are started by conflicts between Pokemon colonies, then I can continuously cause wars and steal their resources. Even though 3 wars can't start a tide, I'm sure that 300 wars will. When the Pokemon Tide starts, I'll have even more opportunities to steal some resources.
    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Komik · DemiGod_2972
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    EternalEden14d
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    Bro was terrified at the idea of causing so many human and Pokemon deaths. Now he's TRYING to cause them...

    If Pokemon Tides are started by conflicts between Pokemon colonies, then I can continuously cause wars and steal their resources. Even though 3 wars can't start a tide, I'm sure that 300 wars will. When the Pokemon Tide starts, I'll have even more opportunities to steal some resources.
    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Komik · DemiGod_2972
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    EternalEden15d
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    Thanks for the chapter. I'm a bit surprised this story is releasing regularly.

    Ch 84 Moon mission
    MARVEL: Scientific Path
    Komik · PyteWriter
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    EternalEden15d
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    *so

    "You have very interesting companions. Welcome to Attilan, I am Blackagar Boltagon, the king of this place. I am unable to speak for personal reasons to pardon me for using telepathy." Black Bolt's voice rang out in the minds of everyone in the room.
    MARVEL: Scientific Path
    Komik · PyteWriter
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    EternalEden18d
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    You're doing well. At this point, the story might become closer to a slice-of-life story, but that's fine. I'd be entertained seeing Earth's advancement and possible integration with the galactic civilizations and/or powers. Maybe some small hiccups along the way like Kang the Conqueror. Marvel IS allergic to peace after all, lol.

    Author here, I am starting to feel the limitations of this story. I am not good at writing a very OP character while balancing the story progression. Cramming so many events and characters in the story hasn't helped either. So I think I will write this story up to 120 or so chapters at most and end it there. What do you guys think?
    MARVEL: Scientific Path
    Komik · PyteWriter
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden18d
    Balas An_op_Angel

    Considering the alien attack, and the portal invasion, Earth isn't thrilled to trade with outsiders yet...

    The Finance Secretary of the Federation raised the next topic, "We are at the final phase of issuing the Federation Dollars as a common currency for Earth. The economic and financial advisory committee is doing the final preparations."
    MARVEL: Scientific Path
    Komik · PyteWriter
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden19d
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    Thanks for the chapter, glad to see this is continuing. :)

    Ch 80 Aftermath
    MARVEL: Scientific Path
    Komik · PyteWriter
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  • EternalEden
    EternalEden21d
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    The story is rather unique, and it does seem like the author tries to put their own spin on things. However, this is heavily undermined by a big flaw of the story. The author has about as much subtlety as a wrecking ball. They're not very good at creating sudden events in a realistic manner. Problems will pop up left and right, with little to no warning, or sometimes even reason. Giving the flimsy excuse the MC must somehow be unlucky. When this author wants something to happen, it will happen, quality be damned. Many times they can't even be bothered to put in the effort for it not to come off as jarring. This is a very frequent problem in the story, and it makes it rather difficult to enjoy despite its positives.

    HP: The Arcane Thief
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    Author, I'm trusting you to go somewhere with this instead of it just being "A valuable lesson"...

    Ch 70 Chapter 69 : Happy Thoughts!
    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Komik · DemiGod_2972
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    EternalEden22d
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    Another good story with good potential suddenly turned trash by laziness and cliches. The story was good at first and had a decent amount of originality. However, as the chapters went on, the translation started becoming lazier and more like a Chinese translation. And becomes worse when it tries to force in Chinese cultivation into the world of pokemon, and does so rather badly. It's even more depressing when you read the notes from the author talking about how hard he worked on this and issues irl.

    Pokemon - A real story
    Komik · TheSilverPrince
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    EternalEden25d
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    They all immediately died because no one thought: "What if he turned it off?"

    As the dust of the battle settled, Esteban stood victorious in the midst of the carnage. He had thwarted their strategy, proving that he was more than just raw power - he was a force to be reckoned with.
    Arrancar Ascension: Apex Predator of Hueco Mundo
    Komik · Hanma_Jack
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