Alys99

ride of the valkyrie? is that the song you are going for ?

Arragog

make the dog take it seriously and start doing more missions

I really enjoyed your story. when I read fanfiction I don't see plagiarism but instead I see someone who has an idea about how a story could have been if there was only one thing different. I really appreciate your ideas for this story and I am hopeful that you will continue to share your ideas with the rest of us. It takes courage to share your ideas. I ask for you to have the courage to continue to share your ideas with us. thank you for your story.