i hate harem, I like non-human protagonists
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you made me laugh bro hahaha🤣😂🤣😂 i would love to see that.
made me laugh.. 🤣🤣😁 another day passed in a happy mood.
good novel,good story, im excited what would he look like when fused with the extremis . i imagined that it would look something like the pic below
thank dude for the support ..
hey man thanks for the honest review. i honestly felt that too when i reviewed it... however I don't know what to do... i tried the first person perspective but i guess it didn't work, that's why i change it in chapter 11 or 12. im gonna edit the first few chaps later but not soon.... also I'm sick of reading novels with sytems .... by the way update is nor regular hehehe
thanks man... ill correct it someday and some of the other typos but not now. don't worry i already noted the words needed for correction ..😊
this is the original ranmaru....
hello guys... I'll shamelessly give myself a 5 star... i just wanted to say that i use first person perspective here in this story for it to be immersive. however, i think that i will switch to third person perspective soon, i don't know but i will try it, it may be better, i think..... and i will try to lengthen each chapter because i fell that it is too lacking and feels rushed... so, yeah that's all.. ohh i still want to add that this is my first work and i am not that good in English. so please bear with it. thank you... don't forget to like😉😘
tobirama should be the best in acting
hey man, the story was good.. i have some idea about susanoo if he unlocked it, just a suggestion if you like to add it .. like having susanoo the size of his body, like having samurai susanoo armor , increasing speed and defense, not like giant susanoo with slow speed because of its size...