thank you

This novel is new and for that, my review is more a incentive than criticism about the story itself. It has points it needs a few touch to improve, like the writing quality, but it has potential. I like the scenario that resembles a mix of steampunk and that movie Wall-E. Going to return later for a better review. Give it a try, you may like it.

Interesting start!

good fighting!

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the review :)

If you enjoy novel like Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, then you definitely going to like this one, since the author itself is a fan of ORV, and the novel contains references for the novel and other novels too. The only thing I hope the author could improve in the next chapters and even edit the previous one, is the writing quality, since it has some grammar errors. With best regards, vorlefan.

Thanks!

thanks xD

Interesting start and so much references! I'm eager to read more

My man is a fellow one xD

It has the potential to be a interesting story to read! It has a clever MC and a interesting backstory and it seems that the concept of good and evil isn't hard defined, meaning it depends of the winner side of story. Give it a try if you enjoy this kind of story!

Nice build up of interactions

Oh, becoming chaotic, I like it xD

My man is happy xD

It is becoming interesting!

Rollecoster of emotion xD I like it

Thanks for the review!

I know the feeling xD

Thanks for the review :)