Pronoobity

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Damn didn’t even notice the author name. Sorry bro

This reads like an ai written comment bro

So that was a mf lie

I would argue he is not incorrect. Your Synopsis of the book is your reader’s second look into the book. Now this is half just a personal thing, but do not repeat your characters full name three times. It is redundant and in my opinion, Regret is a very cringey last name. To repeat it twice more is crazy.

Still a nerd I see

Bro seriously

Her

Weeping angels

It’s a grammatical error, not something to comment on.