Skullyboo

The story is promising, although i think you should limit the system's interference with Thor seeing it's a template system and not your typical RPG system.

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I don't think it's a good idea to tell Catelyn, due to her friendship with littlefinger.

Too much needless drama.

Should of gone with Anne, it's the name intended if Ace was a girl.

He's still in the development stage and he's already on S.H.I.E.L.D/Hydra's radar, brilliant.

it's not yet confirmed, but it looks like Kurenai Yuhi, Nohara Rin are a possibility. I don't know about his teacher Tsunade tho.

He's getting arrogant, he's flaunting his knowledge around like nobody's business. It's dangerous.

Well, since it's a translation it'd been better and more enjoyable to just use Japanese names instead of Chinese ones, that we the readers often don't know who they refer to.

How's he not i the in torture and interrogation department getting his head emptied out? He did a radical change and kept spouting nonsense to the Hyuga heiress, and is still free? This is the ninja world, emphasize on the word NINJA.