Garland

I wasn't really bothered by him if he wasn't aggressive or such but I just wished that he was more than just generic nice guy. I don't even bother with his capabilities considering that the dude is pretty much getting rewards left and right.

This story just went completely downhill. After having such a good opening, the mc turned out to be just some generic nice guy without much personality in him.

What even is this story? The overall plot or whatever it is has some dude taking over Dante during the events of DMC3 and having a Group Chat. That is just so wild and like weird. Reading the story, it's just completely nothing but following the same events even with the same dialogue is the only thing here is the commentary. What reason is their to even have some OC take over Dante instead of just having just Dante with the Group Chat. Its presented as the OC taking over Dante but nothing has any changes, even the freaking dialogue.

It's interesting but i kinda wished that the story picks up the pace. Yes the last chapters ending was fun and could lead to the reveal but with how things are kinda designed, i feel like the reveal of his humanity is going to take a long long while. It's just been kinda boring.

While the story had an interesting and fun concept with a good start, everything kinda just went downhill. Good Ideas but not really good execution. Structure of the story is a mess especially when chapters are just full of massive infodumps that really explains a lot too much. A simple summary is better and having such an infodump during situations just messes up the pacing and flow of the story. Yeah sure its their to explain things to people who are unfamiliar with the anime or manga but some of them are just completely unessecary. You don't need to tell the readers as if they want to learn more, they can just search for it themselves if they are fully interested in it. The true main issue that the story suffers is the MC. While yes it was fun having him takeover a side character, the MC's personality overall was just generic nice guy which kinda became boring and eyerolling. He even has some cluelessness which just was annoying. I expected him to have some personality but really he is no different than the generic harem nice guy which most of the girls like because he is nice. Its especially obvious with the whole situation with Kakinozaka as besides shutting the Male Students up, he had this corny and eyerolling speech in order to just get the girls. You even didn't really help much considering that most of his male classmates are completely not-normal that just pushes the girls towards the MC. Heck, you pretty gave Rito a foul mouth which i questioned why even. Do you really need to make him that troublesome just for Haruna to easily fall in love with the MC? The MC really killed my enjoyment of the story. He is just so generic in personality with nothing really making him fun to read. Systems and Powers are just nothing if the MC is a bore.

Author is too scared to actually make any major changes. Thats why no one was fully defeated or killed in Impel Down. Even when he fought and beat Sadi, she still was the one who woke up the Jailer Beasts just like canon.

The Main Issue of the story comes from how it just copies Rimuru's journey with the whole being in a cave, meeting a dragon, a wolf and then even starting with Goblins. It would have been fine if he was still a slime and had all his starting abilities but it just feels like he tries everything to be like Rimuru which overall just dimishes his character. Even the whole nation building isn't really delved into as anything related to it is just placed to the side. All we see are results and never the process. The handling of the cast from Kuroinu also felt very weak in terms of relationship between nations. They all just easily accepted everything. Sure their were some skepticism but it felt just too quick especially with how things are. This is why it would have been better off if the MC started with Orcs instead of just copying Rimuru with the Goblins. At least with them it would have created further proved to Princess Knights how different they are compared to Olga's forces. Overall, the MC is just a Copy of Rimuru down to his starting monster comrades, the nation building is just non existent and the handling of the other characters were pretty bland. It's not bad but it also not good, just average.

Just waiting for things to be interesting. Probably going to stop for a while and just binge read once it gets enough chapters.

I agree with one of the commenters. Yes having explanations and infodumps are good for those who know nomr of the series but you really don't have to fully explain it. A simple description is enough. The MC suffers from a very simple personality making his thoughts be kinda bland at times thats why his interactions with the other characters are more interesting as they bring more of him compared when he monologues. Overall i hope that the next chapter we get to see him talking to the girls.

You should really fix some of the Dialogue because sometimes it becomes confusing on who is saying what. Things also kinda got jarring with the sudden arrival of new characters but that was fine.