BlackFun

Please for the love of whatever is holy USE the correct Spell names!!!

I really like the story. BUT please stop messing up the exchange rate for Stellar Jade and switching between Jade or coins. In most chapters, you are switching regularly the exchange rate from 100 Coins to 10 Coins per Stellar Jade and instead of stellar coins you are often using Stellar Jade as pricing theme. Example: Mc is explaing that the 100 Stellar Jade can be exchanged for 10000 Coins but in the next sentence he tells the customer the product cost 10000 Stellar Jade. Such a situation happens often in your chapters...

Are his force abilities blocked ???

oh you mean kakashi...

please make it a long one

Sadly, in most cases, the authors that do this drop their story soon after...

red is too much, purple sounds good. If not possible then blue.

I am also very satisfied with this 1th volume. And I think you should at least include some poetry since it fits perfectly with his nature of an ancient cultivator. He might still be a child sometimes, but it would give his character a bit more depth. Will the next vol. be a new Fanfic or will you put everything in this one? Anyway, I am looking forward to the next chapters