The_Paragon_White

Ignorance brings bliss, truly an idiot who trusts everyone is a rare sight these days. Keep it up, brother...

Ignorance brings bliss, truly an idiot who trusts everyone is a rare sight these days. Keep it up, brother...

From what you're demonstrating, it's quite possible that this is the case, but I haven't read any further, so I can't say for sure.

Want me to explain? Well, okay then, the plot is half-assed, the author tried to give depth to the characters, but failed miserably, it's too superficial to catch anyone's attention — the protagonist also leaves much to be desired in many of his decisions, it's as if you're watching a robot and not someone with emotions, despite the author's efforts to try to give him that. The dialogues are so-so and the world-building, precisely because he put Breathing and a half-assed system status, leaves much to be desired. Want more reasons?

Dude, I just found this point of the story kind of stupid, the protagonist taught someone just because the person asked and nothing more, he gave the justification that it was to change her destiny, but he didn't even know her personally! I gave my opinion, if you don't like her, fuck you! Read and do what you want, but don't bother the guy trying to argue about it.

I'm not making a fuss, I just mentioned one of the points that made me not like this story.

For now it's just her

He tells Emma about the system to help...

Let's just say this story is a total waste of time, the main character literally remains "obese" and can't change even if he trains for the rest of his life because of the system, and women are forced to fall in love with him, like, it's disgusting. It looks a lot like those hentais with loser protagonists who are fat, hairy and disgusting... Anyway, I don't recommend it...

Yes, she ran away to join his team. But kind of meh, it was done in a very nonsensical way.