Dao_Master_Penguin

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This is completed on fanfic net it’s called lord of darkness, it’s stolen along with the other books the author has

This book is free and completed on FF net, it’s stolen, it’s called lord of darkness

Why are you putting this in your Patreon if it’s free on fanfiction net, this is a stolen work? I have the actual book on my lists it’s called dark discoveries

Stop complaining

He had ten years with knowledge into a grand wizards mind, he could theoretically feel Voldemort use it so he could just mentally practice it

I really wanted to like it, I read up to chapter 10 in detail, then I skimmed the remaining chapters untill ch 23. It seriously feels like a info dump more than a book with hardly any dialogue compared to descriptions. When you do get dialogue it feels rather emotionless and boring, the dialogue is also overly complicated ( I believe it’s to make the characters feel more noble) but because it’s overly complicated and boring it’s hard to even want to force yourself to read it, it feels like forcing yourself to read a school textbook. But if you enjoy those kind of books then this is for you! But sadly it’s not for readers who want a quick and easy read to get away from life, the author does seem to care about it so that’s a positive. Make sure to read the book to judge for yourselves at least! GL with the book author!

Fleamont was his grandpa, he’s the brother to charlus

That’s why you write fanfics for fun and not support, you have so much competition out there.

This story is all over the place lol, love it