Celleborn

Holy sh*t Jiraya, get over Tsunade, she has a crush on Orichimaru since she was 5, she is calling him his boyfriend since she was 11 (I guess) and still everytime she speaks with Orochimaru you get sad.

Might Duy would be the perfect clone, make then in a better body and have a corp of suicide ultra powerfull taijustu ninja, he doesn't much in the brain departament anyway. Imagine a 8 gates practitioner with Hashirama regeneration and maybe the sharingan (I mean, he can make it so why not?) I don't know if Hashirama cells would give someone the abilitie to survive open the 8 gates but surely would help then kepp fighting or much longer.

I mean, Sasuke had perfect grades and so did Kakashi, so same grades make some sense, But it's like, Sasuke got an A because is the best he could get while Kakashi got an A because it was the best there was to get. And even so it still isn't a good comparison because at 12 Kakashi was almost a Jonin he wasn't at the academy! Let me refrase for you, "he's outstanding—on par with Kakashi in his youth, and by youth I mean that both have a similar level of strength when they graduate, but Sasuke is 12 and Kakashi was 6." Don't misunderstand me, at 16 Sasuke is stronger than kakashi is as a adult, but not during his academy years.

Hey mister author, CALM DOWN, there is no rush here, I felt like I was reading in 2x speed, take more time with your story. I know you probably want to get to the good part fast but going to fast sacrifice depth, show some interaction with his family, the mc reflicting about this new world, what are his values. Yes, going too slow is a problem, but going too fast is just as bad.

Yeah, but he can translate the synopsis as well, or make one if the original don't have one.

Why mix two fics like this? Just make a new one and flag the Ohara one as ended (well basiclly dropped)

No no, guys, don't worry, I did the math, it checks out!

Hey, can someone tell me when this angsty chapters will end? Because I love this fic, but I'm done with this depressing sh*t, don't misunderstand, I know it's important to the mc, but is just to much for me right now and I don't wanna drop the fic.

Wow, this was the least twisty of all the plots, at this point the plot twist would be this guy surviving.

This is just a nitpic but I almost sure that in the original is said that F rank dungeons don't produce (come with?) mana crystals.