yo, check out the update if you still enjoy this story.

yo, check out the update if you still enjoy this story.

Great Story. I find some of these reviews to be highly strange. It seems like people just want to write a poor review simply because they want to be spiteful. The story is wonderful, to the point without drama, and even while i knew next to nothing about Fate, I understood everything. It's a real nice gem to add to the rare collection.

no matter how much time pass's, coming back to this gem for a re-read is incredibly satisfying. even though years have passed, i still hope for more. thanks for the time and effort author.

thats a shame author, it might have been very off topic from canon but you did some incredible OG work. in my opinion, you should leave the fic up. maybe on FF rather than here but it would be a shame to let your work just be deleted. it could be inspiration for someone else with the great quality writing you made.

On one hand, the very basic if understandable grammar is a bit of take away but on the other hand Alice is the best girl and I was very upset to have read till the current (chap 24). I 100% shamelessly demand more. MOAR

Get better soon. I'm 100% saying this to be heartfelt and not because you made a potential offer of writing more HP fics. Completely genuine I am. Yes. Kek, feel better dude, don't let life kick ya down. When life gives you lemons, throw them back with C4 attached.

Om Mani Padme Hum x108

Very simple and to the point story. Deserves the 5 stars. For webnovel, this is top quality work. You cut out the useless drama and strange character traits that so many have, made a mature MC, nice connections with the family, and the system is simplified and not spammed like crazy. it's a lovely bleach fic and i'm excited for more. If there was any request i had, and this is just a request which you can 100% ignore, besides wanting more chapters, it would be to limit the amount of skills the MC gets. When i read system stories and the MC just has this endless long list of skills, i feel exhausted. It's way more pleasurable to read about someone who can use less skills in more ways, than more skills in less ways. Thank you.

*Hiissss* It's you.

1.5

*clears throats.* Shuhang. i don't know how to say this to you so ill be frank. you have a yandere. run. run like your very butt is at risk because it is. your three choices in life are to kill the yandere, accept the yandere, or run.

I think we all know shuhang needs to stab him with his karmic spea....swor...Saber.

I don't know what to say that we have reached a point where a talking divine sword gets more screen time than senior white. it's like his familiar at this point. its the straight man to all the chaos that happens. but its just so flippin funny I can't even say I want it to change. +1 fan of senior scarlet heaven sword

your welcome. check out the full version

what senior white wants, happens.

while not a complaint, i just thought i should point something out. You may or may not be falling into one of many author traps with the movesets of your pokemon. It's still possible you can make it work without issue, but as the story progresses, you will likely drive yourself crazy on using moves. with all the elements you added to flesh out your original design on the pokemon world, the work you need to do going down the line will just keep increasing. again, this is not a complaint, i just felt i should mention it. best of luck

1 yen says Shuhang seeks death with his next words

the nine province group would disagree with you. They would disagree quite passionately.