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Sorry caugut up in travel, new chapter will come out soon

Yup

As an author, I have seen many books before. This one stands out. The world building in this is exceptional. It is not apparent immediately, but when the story progresses, it starts to show. The book is very well written, with good grammar and punctuation everywhere, and a really nice way of story telling.

The initial setting is well written. The grammar and the world building is wonderful. The character is developed properly and the story takes an interesting turn as it progresses. The writing quality is solid enough to keep you waiting for more

The setting of the story is just excellent, and the characters are portrayed beautifully. Pacing is really good, and the world building is solid. The details of everything are given, and the reader just cant wait for the next chapter. The way he builds suspense is just incredible.

Writing quality is pretty good. The story is set well with good world background, and the charactar is introduced really well. This is a pretty good read and a well needed twist on gates and dungeons, if you will. It finally changes the trope on what they are

I'm back

and then, the words disappear from the sites ... That's why I make sure to write around a thousand words before adding the words, it doesn't increase price as each coin increases for 200 words, not 30

trying to get the next chapter out, but I am barely able to handle one book with college

Yes... just to be clear though, snoring panda is awesome. But panda, not so much