LordValmar

I won't lie, a someone who has no knowledge of Bleach, these last two chapters have been quite hard to follow.

It might had been mentioned before and I glossed over it, but why were his trucks hauling radioactive chemicals?

I think youre missing a few chapters

It feels like you're missing a lot chapters here

Its like the little robot from Flubber, I love it.

Hope he carefully researched everyone and was very specific about who gets what. Given all he's experienced, it'd surprising he trusts there are any truly genuine places like this to donate money where it isn't just a front for something darker.

Lol this dude just soaked up a hail of bullets and still had the energy to hug someone and give out such a longwinded summary and request. Uncle Ben could have learned a thing to to from this guy. Reminds me of the start of Tropic Thunder where the MC is being blasted and keeps running in slow motion.

Second version with slightly smaller font.

Loving the story so far. The tarot cards were a neat touch. I've added a title to your story cover, in case you're interested. Feel free to use it or ignore it at your leisure. If you could though I'd appreciate a thumbs up just so I know you read this if you decide not to use it. Cheers~

Loving the story, and great new cover! You're a very talented artist. To show my appreciation for your story, I added a title to the cover. In case you were interested. Though obviously you have the talent to do it yourself if you wanted a title, but maybe it'll be flattering someone liked your work enough to bother?