LuxNoctiss

will be fun to see to ad leest until the triwizard tournament its enhough time to explore the god stuff and let rose grow up a bit and that way rose is more inline with the age of winx stuff

+1

so far it's a good story and a nice way how he got his system keep up te good work

+1

one love intrest pls and if more max 2/3 and keep going its a nice story so far

that was a unspectacular end. is a out of nowhere finish for the book

this chapter and the next one are just copied and edit from the prison guards only knew that I escaped after reading my novel

the concept behind the system has a nice idea behind it but the rest is just trash the girl gets thrown away after the first chapters there is no depth behind anything it's just a waste don't know how this got selected

is probably not gonna get fixed