the MC will not go far with his attitude and only talisman..he feels like a really naive and stupid doesn't have family and money management.. doesn't know how to fight other then using talisman..too weak mantelity.

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why mc is throwing money every where ....mc is too much naive...it feels like after getting everything easily mc doesn't know what to do....

story development is good...but no dual cultivation yet.. mentality of yue yan is big question as he is afraid to have other women...so it's better to change it to a normal novel other then dual cultivation novel...

starting is good... don't drop the novel in between...as many others do.you loose your credibility by doing so..I personally don't read novels from thr authors who dropped one in between..

will you update chapters regularly....

continue..it's a fun read.

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