Dale_Melvin

good story. very entertaining . wish it was longer or there was a sequel to it.

intriguing idea curious to read where it goes. author has some trouble with him her he she.

great story so far very entertaining. happy new year and I think you should Go for the word count that cost 14 coins as it allows us to use a fast pass we can get daily from the adds and votes. I have figured out 14 coins is what one fast pass covers. otherwise I vote for the ten coins chapters.

thanks for the chapter. nice first meeting. I wonder if he will join birch to earn the money necessary or do jobs in a nearby town or go after the team magma guy with the wild rat to get his money back.

nice chapter. good choice of first Pokémon. curious on if it's male or female though as that'll tell its final evolution.

great start eager to read more. curious on who his first companion is.

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