Grenhaer

Now I understand the comments about the poor translation... is this a Google translation?

The fanfiction is interesting, I am very glad that there are still interesting fanfictions on this site. The translation is also good. The biggest negative here is the MC's name... although over time I got used to it...

It's moments like these that make people hate the harem... it's too banal... in every Chinese work, when Pakura is in the harem, she is subjugated the same way everywhere... 0 creativity.

understandable... the author wanted Pakura in the harem... and I was also surprised and glad when she was attacked... but there will most likely be an obvious cliche :(

what nonsense? There is no full-fledged susano in a regular mangekyosharingan! Only the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan has a Susano with legs. an ordinary mangekyou sharingan cannot show such power (that's why he goes blind...). The author made a very stupid plot hole here!

what nonsense? why does the description say about some silver hair?!!!!

everything here is very stupid and pointless... there is too little logic in everything. and MC is one of the stupidest uchihas I've ever seen in fanfiction... most likely the stupidest uchiha I've ever seen)

... and where is the revenge?... he only killed one person... this is one of the most ridiculous revenges I have seen... it was some kind of high-speed shooting (lasted only 3 seconds... and he was in front of many people bragged about this revenge... but he did nothing... with his ability he could constantly kill someone... but he couldn’t even get paranoid...)