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Thank 4 chap

The concept is good and it's readable but my main problem with this story is the ghost rider itself for a being who's only goal is to send any guilty soul it finds to hell the author turned it into a talkative, joke telling, teenager that's always complaining and sighing and to top it off the rider was the one who convinced the mc to join a team of heros not to mention the fact heros should've never let him join seeing as he has killed people and said he doesn't care and won't stop and batman just left and let him continue so my main problem is the author doesn't understand the basics of the characters he's trying to write and writes them in the most unbelievable way for the characters to act

Harem story without a harem is just weak this world has nothing special about it besides that you should've chosen a different anime to do. --------------------------------------------------------‐--------------------

Lol 'not many people like or know stars wars' you mean the most successful movie franchise till marvel end game ok bro I get it you lived under a rock your entire life. Esspecailly comparing it to young justice like young justice isn't a mid c teir show and isnt a reboot of a better show

I love all the halos before 4 but my favorite has to be halo 2

I liked it at first and it has some good concepts but I keep finding translation grammatical errors every paragraph. Its not terrible but there are a lot of little things that add up that ruin the feel of the whole story for me

Throwing the word slave around really casually when the only punishment the system ever said he'll get is it not working for a bit. What you mean to say is you just don't like systems and the fact that he uses it and every other criticism you have is that he isn't alpha enough when he has no power at all surrounded by beings that can kill him by accident this isn't actual criticism you just want the mc to have the mindset of a stupid 15 year old edgelord who just discovered Andrew tate

I hope deathstroke isn't offed quickly he's always been one of my favorite characters in dc