SapphiraK

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

The over all story seems good. And the plot is also nice. Though I would say there needs some improvement on the character part, and the way they are introduced, but that is negligible!! the story is really captive!! Good job author!!

Next update please!!!