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Chsnge sit to seat, thrn your srntenvce will make sense. Keep on writing. I am excited to where your story will take me. Love it so far, I really wsnt to strangle thst traitor, Paula. Get a life, Girl.
Chage the " more and more bolder to either : "bolder and bolder" or "increasingly more bold over time." Then your idea will make more sense.
'Sit' is a motion pf putting your bottom on a chair or position while 'seat' is an object or place to sit down.
"laps" connote a distance travelled usually used in sports. Chsnge that to lap(which means a part of the body where one sits another person as a gesture of affection).
Chane the last word of your last sentence from "... worst ." to "... worse." So your sentence will make sense and your flow clearer.
Throw( ti cast off) not thorough ( to make sure or to be carefully precise inyou projected outcome). Then you senrence makes sense
Change the last part of her last sentence to "... to sit on his lap becomes stronger." Then Don Raffaelo's need becomes clearer.
Chane last part of the last sentence to "... to sit on his lap. "
Change the last part of the last srntene to "...seeing their children's fate..." then the srntence makes more sense.
Change"...more heavy..." to "...heavier..." Then your sentence becomes gramatically correct.