Grimace1118

Damn, only bad thing about this so far is no daily release

Awesome story so far, can't wait for the next chapter.

No harm in trying out some smut and see how it goes, if it doesn't pan out then no need to do more after that.

tftc

tftc

Really good so far, keep it up. ...........................................................................................................................

Starts out well but starts going downhill after he finishes his training arc and starts to interact with the main cast. Quickly starts to bash the OG story characters and Shrek out of nowhere. Like MC has absolutely no reason or motive to be so aggressive to any of these characters but does so anyways. Paragraphs and sometimes even entire chapters are also sometimes out of place and jumbled up.

Damn disappointing that this fic has just devolved into shrek bashing for no reason at all, started out well. MC has absolutely no reason to be agro to any of these characters and noticed this trend ever since he was an AH to bei bei and tang ya out of nowhere. Oh well onto the next fic.