Just a college student who got dragged into the addicting world of novels................
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absolutely amazing, excellent sex scenes, excellent system and op powerups. What I feel like is it is too rushed. You have an excellent idea, excellent characters but everything is too rushed. Think for sometime, get an editor also and then re do this novel. it holds an immense potential. Maybe add fantasy elements to it, even the pregnancy without getting fcked can be explained in fantasy genre. Just came accross this and dont want you to remain without reviews. Best of luck brother.
the only reason electro lost is cause of nonsense plot. Otherwise he can just fry spiderman in 1 sec.
shove thermodynamics up ur ass. Science doesn't hold in a fictional reality
why would you care what an ant does with a jelly bean?
its not chinese format, chinese format are kill and be supreme, not be a beta japanese brainless idiotic cuck all the time. This mc is the later one if you havent noticed.
why would you want the rules and morality in an extraordinary world where death is just around the corner to be similar to a pathetic normal law bound world where we live?
in an extraordinary world, morals don't hold up the same as they are in a normal law bound society
let's say you have the smartest brain, still on starting a company, you will need investment, connections etc. Once you are strong enough, these things can't touch you but when weak, you need them, they are a necessity. Same is the case here
you don't want it, don't read it, let us enjoy the harem please, shooo
is there ntr? I hate ntr, even if it's for a monster mc