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The point is they are both hyenas it is illogical that her entire head fits in. Also the author repeatedly brings up animal butts. To me it hasn't been done in a humors way like ISSTH, but more weird and unnecessary.

What is wrong with this author? That doesn't even make sense.

Please read your own writing. There are too many mistakes. "like you what you said ."

Ten thousand? *one thousand

Conveniently forgot about the divination.

*funeral x3 It only takes a minute to use a spellchecker author.

*existence

I think it should be: *it took a while for Chris to wrap her head around this whole thing.* I have never heard it said the way you did it. Also I have noticed some other things, anyways it could do with a re-read and edit. Just my thoughts.

*assassination

HP stayed the same after level up.