DaoHeist

There are no adverse enemies introduced in the novel, I have read until chapter 20 and the ones that oppose the prince barely do anything to move the plot and make it inticing, it is a very bland novel with a Gary Stu protagonist

Yes we know you’re a medical student stop flexing on us plebians

Yeah I just noticed the op tag nvm

Everything else was great except for the character design. Maybe its just that I got used to reading protagonist who are perfect in every way possible in webnovels, but imo it just really makes the narrative tension bland if the protagonist is always right and everyone who opposes him is wrong, that the protagonist have the greatest power, and can achieve anything without a struggle. The only narrative tension I felt was when he fought a god that caused him to lose his village, separate him from his family, and seal himself somewhere for years. Everything else went slowly boring for me afterwards he broke the seal. Since he already attained the powers of god, and always act like he is in the moral high ground without the perspective of the opposing people who mostly act like a cut cardboard. Probably make the readers invested with the side characters and villains, and don’t make the protagonist right all the time, it could still be wholesome without him being an overpowered mary sue. It was pretty comedic and engaging at the start though, slightly better than most of the naruto fanfics in this app. Anyways, keep up the good work !

I gotchu

Sadge

💯💯

Thats dope

Omae wa mou shindeiru

Its easy for Shiruken to say, he had powers; Good men can’t do anything against tyranny if they don’t have enough power, especially if they are controlled by fear and lack unity against said tyrant. Those who begin to oppose tyranny recklessly will only become martyrs and nothing else.