Dhaliwal2

Bro what's up with this trash lowlife behavior by MC? The story is already full of clichés but MC makes it even more unreadable.

Bro it's okay to be pervy, atleast make the MC likeable. He's such a trash that I can't even cheer for him even if he gets a girl. Hopefully there will be character growth.

I wonder if he will give gene enhancement potion to Tsunade and Jiraiya too.

So he doesn't need to gather basic knowledge? If someone asks him about science they will clearly find the huge gap in his knowledge.

Honestly MC's personality is boring.

Dragon slayer magic is op. And he got the most versatile one.

His illusions should be OP now.

Bro atleast decide who's POV are you writing while translating. It kept switching between Shinji and MC, completely changing their word's meaning.

If he took the jutsu head on, then he should be dead.....burned to crisp. It's not that fireball jutsu has low firepower, most people just dodge it because of it's slow attack speed.

Yeah, not a big fan of unchangeable Fate/destiny thing. So goodbye 👋.