VeggieBlue

Like we all want to go. Quote from the Gecko brothers "here's to grow fat and dying in the arms of a beautiful woman"

One power I think you should limit is the chemical power that made the Boltons attack. I think you should make it that it can only influence an action not cause it. For example you can explain it as if some wanted to do something, it make than forget inhabiting and do it. It would make him less all powerful yes, but it would give more range to the story.

i don't think it's a bad wish. from what I got it's not just meeting people but people that could fall in love with her. Sure being important will have woman come at you, but it might be more Gold diggers than people that could love you for you.

Prejudice is often irrational and long last thing. Our world has many example of people continue to feed the hate generation after the other.

I hope you give Rowan credit for the Blood Fruit. So far all her accomplishment have been given to others. I would like for her to be at least known outside of Hogwarts. What better way to get more protection from say death eaters to have the backing and gratitude of the Vampires.

it'd more like kindred spirits found each other.

it's how you get a demon of the mist Zabuza.

Have you consider moving this story to patron or making it into a kindle book. I think it is good enough to do so.

One of the best Cultivator novel so far. It has not fallen into a lot of the trappings that most of the genre has. A the characters feel alive into the story.

I was hoping Freya was with her wolf wife Kelyn they were great together.