WeavingSpider

Author are you still writing or did you go into Hiatus? been 4 months now and no update or lifesign of you

little update... now also long drawn out fighting chapters, followed with now 5 reaction chapters to said fight chapters.

did we have reaction to reaction chapter already?

did you guys notice that the ai which created the bookcover didnt like to create hands? the one holding the Wand, only has 4 fingers.

Akiko has more magic power? is there a nerf i skipped somewhere?

the actors name is Milo Ventimiglia, though i only know him because of the tv show "heroes"

they are still waiting in the real world, aren't they? poor buggers

the whole atlantis arc so far is xianxia faceslapping, courting death etc.

Actual against reading this novel reasons:-mc goes to school and somehow it gets never mentioned in which year he is after a while-30ish filler chapter about quidditch- every odd chapter there will be "the mc cant possibly do that, oh he actually did that" chapters-the story is very predictable (not necessarily a bad thing)-all girls fall in love in one way or the other with alex-every odd chapter feels too short with all that said, i aint saying it is a bad fanfic, i am just pointing out some flaws.