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strelking

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I love to read and mostly like fanction. Because in those novel, as a fan of an orginal story, you can add and remove what you want to the original story. You make the story deviate from the orginal..

2018-06-20 BergabungUnited States
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  • strelking
    strelking11 hours ago
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    Thanks for the chapter. I have a couple of questions? Will the mc be able to use ninjutsu in the future? If not will you have him practice the Eight Gates? After all even though the mc will have Zoro Full power and fighting Styles in the future, that's still not enough to fight the Ōtsutsuki Clan in the future. He is born in the Naruto World, which mean he has access to Chakra and Natural Energy. Even if he is not talented in chakra, with the physical potential of Zoro, he should be able to master the Eight Gates. As for Chakra, using it against Ōtsutsuki Clan is practically a death wish. They are the creator of it. With the power of chakra he might be able to defeat them or even kill a few, but to outright wipeout the Ōtsutsuki Clan with "Chakra technique" is impossible.

  • strelking
    strelking12 days ago
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    Thanks for the chapter. With the mc ability to transform people into Witchers, if the mc were to transform his Grandfather into a Witcher, the mc Noble Family will automatically obtain an Battlefield Veteran Old Monster. After all Witcher have longer lifespan than normal human.

  • strelking
    strelking12 days ago
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    Thanks for the chapter. I remember correctly, other than the Indra's Arrow of Sasuke Uchiha the most powerful lightning jutsu in The Naruto world are Kirin and Raikiri with those 2 jutsu the Thrid Raikage will obtain the power to fight an opposing force of ten thousand shinobi single-handedly for three consecutive days and nights (if not more), without dying. Also, Here are some ninja Tools with a lot of potential that I think the mc could use to develop his Shinobi Village: " Flying Destruction Machine and the Land of the Sky's flying headquarters (Land of the Sky), Chakra Armour (Land of Snow), Lightning Release Suit, Bell (charm) from ( Land of Demons), Curry of Life, Cursed Seal Device, Infinite Armour." Let's not forget the Chakra Cannon (Kumogakure). If I remember correctly Hidden Cloud Shinobi Village does have a Chakra Cannon that they were going to use during the Fourth Shinobi World War. Even though it needs an astronomical amount of chakra to be used that thing is still very dangerous and has a terrifying destructive power. After all, it has the ability to destroy the moon, if not more. With the the Land of the Sky's flying headquarters plus the energy supply of Zero Tail, add on to that the Chakra Cannon. This is practically a Flying Fortress with mass destruction capability.

  • strelking
    strelking19 days ago
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    Thanks for the chapter. Their are a lot of way that the mc could increase the power of his crew. 1- Recruit Black Beard future Subordinates that came from impel down prison. ( like Avalo Pizarro, Catarina Devon, San Juan Wolf and Shiryu). 2- Recruit Douglas Bullet. With those 5 people, The Beast Pirate 3 Calamities could become 8. 3- Recruit the Vinsmoke Family and help them to conquer North Blue. 4- Strengthen the Alliances with Big Mom by having a couple of children with her and share the cultivation technique so that she could regain some of her youth. 5- Recruit Caesar Clown, give him recourses and put pressure on him on his research experiment to mass produce giants. If need be you could even have Vinsmoke Judge give him a helping hand. 6- Try and see if those martial arts techniques will work in the One Piece World and maybe pass some of them to his subordinates: Shaolin Kung Fu, Wing Chun, Tai Chi (Taijiquan), Baguazhang (Eight Trigram Palm), Xingyiquan (Form and Intention Fist), Sanda (Sanshou), Mantis Fist, Southern Fist (Nan Quan), Bajiquan (Eight Extremes Fist), Drunken Fist (Zui Quan). If those martial-art techniques work on the One Piece World, The MC and Group will become the most mysterious Organization in the One Piece World, after all some of this Martial-Arts even give it's user the possibility of an increase on Lifespan. I can't wait to see how this novel will develop.

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  • strelking
    strelkinga month ago
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    Thanks for the chapter. With the Soul Devil Fruit, the mc could easily update some special weapons into Dangerous level. Like the Gunbai Uchiwa, the Seven Ninja Swords of the Mist (except for Samehada since it's already a living weapon), the Bashōsen, Sword of Kusanagi. He could even go as far as to make the Land of the Sky's flying headquarter into a Homie. That could be the Uchiha Clan new Sky flying headquarter,

  • strelking
    strelkinga month ago
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    Thanks for the Chapter. If I remember correctly Hidden Cloud Shinobi Village does have a Chakra Cannon that they were going to us during the Fourth Shinobi World War. Even though it needs an astronomical amount of chakra to be used that thing is still very dangerous and has a terrifying destructive power. After all, it has the ability to destroy the moon, if not more. Why not add it to the Clan Weapons Collection.

  • strelking
    strelkinga month ago
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    Thanks for the chapter. If I remember correctly outside of the 5 Major Ninja Village and the Akatsuki Organization there are still some Ninjas with Potential. If the mc were to transform them into demon this will make his organization more Mysterious, unique and dangerous. Like Guren with her Crystal Release, En no Gyōja (with Fury) former leader of the Tsuchigumo Clan, Arashi (with the Curse Mandala and the Casualty Puppet) the leader of the Fūma Clan, The Iburi Clan. Those 4 will be a very good addition to the mc organization.

  • strelking
    strelking2 months ago
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    Thanks for the chapter there are a lot of species if manage and breed properly will bring many advance to the mc. After if the mc manage to acquire some devil fruit users or simply some devil fruits that has the ability to control Animals and beasts that will be a game changer. Here are some species that I think the mc should definitely add to his collection: Sandora Lizard, Sandora Catfish, Moving Crab, Bananawani, Lapahn, God Wind, Tigers, Dinosaurs and other Prehistoric Animals, Royal Squid, Giant Frog, Giant Scorpion, Giant Bugs, Sky Lamprey, Sky Shark, Cloud Wolf, Giant Snake, Octopus Balloon, Sumo Frog, Guntai Ari, Agehaguera, Batch Fly, Poison Bird Poi Jura, Oh Imomushi, Toramata, Panther, Hawk, Manticore, Wolf Unit, Hercules Beetle, Humandrill, Giant Centipede, Carnivorous Tube Worms, Spotted Sharks, Fighting Bull, Fighting Lion, Fighting Fish, Territorial Sea Slug, Giant Aquatic Centipede, Sutchies, Baboon, Koma, Komashika, Komatori, Giant Cat.