Kalsapher

Hiruzens wife is biwako sarutobi

ima assume qi is meant to be Chakra.

what messed up time-line is this

messed up the names by a generation

This one fits the sloooooooowwwwww roll to a T. Been reading this one for awhile I actually dropped it at 157 originally due to how insufferably slow the story is going but decided to come back and read more due to boredom. The story and writing don't really have any problems other than how long what feels like should be one chapter is spread into three. The mc is also a sore spot for me as everytime he hints at his special ability or origin it never fully gets explained despite some people actually knowing about it. I highly doubt genjustu resistance or full immunity is what your going for here but it is kinda annoying that now I've read upto 285 and all ive got is a connection to root and the genjustu thing. Despite Hiruzen mentioning something about him in the early chapters. Now normally in a story this wouldnt be an issue but with how slow everything is going it just made me even more annoyed. Plus do you have to cover every psychological thing he comes up against? Also still a genin at this stage is a bit late. Yea he was part of the war and before that part of the police but again way too slow of development. 300 chapters to chuunin maybe? Another 300 to jounin or if this keeps pace itll be special jounin first. Which again would not be a problem if it wouldnt take 5yrs real time to reach. So if im interested at that time Ill come back but for now ill drop it yet again.

yea far too many are like this ive dropped quite a few stories because of this and the typical trope where badass women turn into useless weak meek characters for the mc.

yea they find a way to safely transfer the kyuubi and she reverts to her younger self instead of a grandma shes once again a beautiful young woman. So of course she sleeps with a teenager.

So who is actually uploading this cause the other title on this site is Naruto just wants to be a Shinigami. Is it a rip retranslation or is this one the real one?

you and everyone else here saved me some time id have been pissed to read 600+ chapters for him to just start his journey.

So im confused he had a log pose but hes not on the grand line or new world? Did I miss something? Did I skip over him crossing the calm belt or something? If I did I apologize otherwise tf?