A pro novel reader having 7 years of experience. You can ask my opinion on your work. My English is not good so you'll have to try hard to understand.
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Unique system novel but gets butchered later from sci fi to martial arts. Focuses too much on clones instead of the main story. Also not good interaction with people around mc. He simply forgets all humanity after taking them out of earth.
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Diddy?