The quality of the writing is very good even though it is the author's first time writing a novel. The story and plot development are very interesting.

The story is very good, it is beautifully written, and it has already hooked me up..... and I am wondering how things will end. The writing quality is good

It is truly unique story—an epic clash between these powerful poles of the mafia world. The characters are interesting. the world-building is good. although we are still at the beginning of the story, I think it will be one worth reading.

thank you very much, honestly as you can see English isn't my first language, so that's why I have some problems, I will go through all the chapters again soon

thank you for pointing out these mistakes I will give the chapters another round of editing soon