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Author, a suggestion: When the NEST comes for the MC you could have Danny, his brother, convince the MC to let him, Danny, be the real soul/person to take the oath of loyalty and the NEST wouldn't know because it would look like the oath of loyalty was connected to the MC since Danny's soul is in the MC right now. This way the MC would be free of their control and would be able to learn everything about them and their secrets and use that information to free Danny and his Parents and his Sister from the NEST. He could even free others who would end up joining the MC in the end. This way the MC could work against the NEST without them knowing it or having the GEAS stopping him from doing so. The entire time the MC will just go along with the NEST's orders pretending to be under their GEAS until it is time to turn against them. This way the MC wouldn't be their dog and would instead be spying on them while becoming stronger till he can deal with them.
Author, a suggestion: When the NEST comes for the MC you could have Danny, his brother, convince the MC to let him, Danny, be the real soul/person to take the oath of loyalty and the NEST wouldn't know because it would look like the oath of loyalty was connected to the MC since Danny's soul is in the MC right now. This way the MC would be free of their control and would be able to learn everything about them and their secrets and use that information to free Danny and his Parents and his Sister from the NEST. He could even free others who would end up joining the MC in the end. This way the MC could work against the NEST without them knowing it or having the GEAS stopping him from doing so. The entire time the MC will just go along with the NEST's orders pretending to be under their GEAS until it is time to turn against them. This way the MC wouldn't be their dog and would instead be spying on them while becoming stronger till he can deal with them.
Author I hope you are not going to turn the MC into a slave. If you do you will likely lose readers. If the MC is forced in one way or another to take on a geas from the Nest that will be making the MC a slave and thus their Dog. No mater how you try to spin it the MC will still be their Dog. Even if you turn around and end up making the MC take over the Nest organization from the inside or make him their leader he will still be their Dog and readers will end up dropping the LN. It is enough that you had the MC learn a bit and he knows that something exists that has control over his parents and his sister. Even if the MC hates them right now that could be fixed with him slowly learning why they didn't have contact with him and his brother to keep them out of the grasp of the Nest (if that is the real reason). Then the MC can stay OUT of the nest and kill them off when he has more power. At the very least the MC can HIDE in the expanse and never come back to the normal world and just work through his contracted ex-lords and grow stronger and greater inside before coming out to kill off the Nest. Having the MC take on the Geas of the nest whether forced or not and having the MC take it over from the inside will be nothing but cliche.... Please don't make the MC a slave.
Author I hope you are not going to turn the MC into a slave. If you do you will likely lose readers. If the MC is forced in one way or another to take on a geas from the Nest that will be making the MC a slave and thus their Dog. No mater how you try to spin it the MC will still be their Dog. Even if you turn around and end up making the MC take over the Nest organization from the inside or make him their leader he will still be their Dog and readers will end up dropping the LN. It is enough that you had the MC learn a bit and he knows that something exists that has control over his parents and his sister. Even if the MC hates them right now that could be fixed with him slowly learning why they didn't have contact with him and his brother to keep them out of the grasp of the Nest (if that is the real reason). Then the MC can stay OUT of the nest and kill them off when he has more power. At the very least the MC can HIDE in the expanse and never come back to the normal world and just work through his contracted ex-lords and grow stronger and greater inside before coming out to kill off the Nest. Having the MC take on the Geas of the nest whether forced or not and having the MC take it over from the inside will be nothing but cliche.... Please don't make the MC a slave.
Author I hope you are not going to turn the MC into a slave. If you do you will likely lose readers. If the MC is forced in one way or another to take on a geas from the Nest that will be making the MC a slave and thus their Dog. No mater how you try to spin it the MC will still be their Dog. Even if you turn around and end up making the MC take over the Nest organization from the inside or make him their leader he will still be their Dog and readers will end up dropping the LN. It is enough that you had the MC learn a bit and he knows that something exists that has control over his parents and his sister. Even if the MC hates them right now that could be fixed with him slowly learning why they didn't have contact with him and his brother to keep them out of the grasp of the Nest (if that is the real reason). Then the MC can stay OUT of the nest and kill them off when he has more power. At the very least the MC can HIDE in the expanse and never come back to the normal world and just work through his contracted ex-lords and grow stronger and greater inside before coming out to kill off the Nest. Having the MC take on the Geas of the nest whether forced or not and having the MC take it over from the inside will be nothing but cliche.... Please don't make the MC a slave.
Author I hope you are not going to turn the MC into a slave. If you do you will likely lose readers. If the MC is forced in one way or another to take on a geas from the Nest that will be making the MC a slave and thus their Dog. No mater how you try to spin it the MC will still be their Dog. Even if you turn around and end up making the MC take over the Nest organization from the inside or make him their leader he will still be their Dog and readers will end up dropping the LN. It is enough that you had the MC learn a bit and he knows that something exists that has control over his parents and his sister. Even if the MC hates them right now that could be fixed with him slowly learning why they didn't have contact with him and his brother to keep them out of the grasp of the Nest (if that is the real reason). Then the MC can stay OUT of the nest and kill them off when he has more power. At the very least the MC can HIDE in the expanse and never come back to the normal world and just work through his contracted ex-lords and grow stronger and greater inside before coming out to kill off the Nest. Having the MC take on the Geas of the nest whether forced or not and having the MC take it over from the inside will be nothing but cliche.... Please don't make the MC a slave.
Why do authors have to always pic useless back seat characters as the MC's wife? Healers, support, archers, ect.... Come on pick a female lead that can FIGHT by the MC's side for crying out loud. Alice or his Tigerfange Maid that has been helping him from the very start are far far far better picks than a stupid healer....
It was a random different type of race was all I was trying to point out. I mean if the author absolutly needed it to be an elf he could have done a half-elf half dragon. Or if it really didn't need to be an elf it could have been an awesome Space-Law species, a void-law species, decay-law, death-law, light-law, or many other types of species out there any of them could be combined to be half and half mixed species..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .
This whole thing is just stupid. The author is just doing this to drag things out for more filler.... How is it wrong for the MC to combine his two parts of his soul back into 1 body? How would that not speed up his souls recovery and help him cast spells? The author wrote that the MC would learn from the Dragon, yet to this point has not even come close to doing so.....
I agree... This whole thing is just stupid. The author is just doing this to drag things out for more filler.... How is it wrong for the MC to combine his two parts of his soul back into 1 body? How would that not speed up his souls recovery and help him cast spells? The author promised us that the MC would learn from the Dragon, yet to this point has not even come close to doing so.....
This whole thing is just stupid. The author is just doing this to drag things out for more filler.... How is it wrong for the MC to combine his two parts of his soul back into 1 body? How would that not speed up his souls recovery and help him cast spells?