Blueman97

honestly I am more excited for this than the main story at the moment

this is just for the tarnished, i hopes he looks like the mc, just for the kick of it.

another banger chapter by the main man

for a moment i thought mc received Yahweh's inheritance. cus you know "Let there be light"

this is the third novel with the same type of cliffhanger and its infuriating me, all of them are good but it always ends on the most interesting parts.

+1

honestly this lost my interest in the third chapter in the second chapter they are talking to the mc as if they know his future the dialogue feels unnatural, there is no development of character in the second chapter or third with the mother and sister is as if they only know how to kingdom business. What I mean is that there no natural feeling to how a family should feel. Then the icing on the cake taking the mc as a 4 year old to practice combat, bruh.

BROOOOOOOOO ANOTHER CHAPTER HAS COME

The story is good, but so far it is just a summary of a story like a recap with i think 3 chapters with actual dialogue when I read it......

or hear me out get the ki engine she stole